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[mystiquesmoon]

TO FEEL WEIGHTLESS

In white she walks

Furrowed fields of dreams

Haunt her brow

Crystallised indentations fold around her feet

Making it difficult to walk straight and narrow

pathways to her soul seem so far away

She wants to float above it all

Leaving the scars behind

the locked door to serendipity

Inner peace is the one thing she craves

Dipped in white tranquility

Watching herself float

above the blood stained broken strips of grass

In the colour of night

Deep blue skies hold her whilst she exhales

letting all the rancid air free from her soul

In whiteness she drifts

Above the fields of the deepest blue


This poem i wrote has made it into the semi finals, lol i still cant believe it!!
Just wanted to share with someone cos i'm soo excited
Please do not copy and use this poem without consent it is a copyright of my work(thankyou)

[scooo]

that's great congrats........

[mystiquesmoon]

Thankyou!!

[GaryT]

'onya mystiquesmoon
I hope your elatation is not to soon,
many a poet has had the shaft
and not know it!
There is a scam going round
asking for prouse to be entered
into a comp with prizes for poem
then later not know 'em.

I really do hope you win and the comp is legit. best wishes Gary

[mystiquesmoon]

Gary thankyou for your concern here is the site www.poetry.com it is a legitamate site has been going for years!!

lol i'm just happy because it was considered i do not at all depend on money from my poetry at all, i just love writing them and getting recognised is enough of a gift* hugs* thankyou though!